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SPM English Speech Writing: Format, Techniques & High-Scoring Examples

How to write a speech for SPM English Directed Writing. Format template, opening techniques, and persuasive closing strategies.

By Teacher Daletha · 5 min read · 7 Dec 2024
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Speech Writing: Talk to Your Audience, Not at Them

A speech is fundamentally different from a letter or report. You are not writing a document — you are speaking directly to real people in the room. Your tone should be engaging, personal, and persuasive. The examiner is checking whether your writing sounds like something a real person would actually say out loud.

This is one of the most common Directed Writing formats in SPM English, and it is also one of the most mishandled. Many students write speeches that read like essays — flat, impersonal, and lifeless. The result is lost marks in both format and language. Let us fix that.

Speech Format Template

Memorise this structure. Every speech you write for SPM should follow it:

A very good morning to [specific audience — name individuals by title].

[Introduction: State who you are, your role, and the purpose of your speech.]

[Content Point 1 — with elaboration using the RICE technique]

[Content Point 2 — with elaboration using the RICE technique]

[Content Point 3 — with elaboration using the RICE technique]

[Powerful closing — call to action, challenge, or inspiring statement]

Thank you.

How Speech Marks Are Awarded

ComponentMarksWhat Examiners Look For
Format3-4Greeting, sign-off (“Thank you”), speech tone throughout
Content12-14All content points from the question addressed with elaboration
Language15-17Engaging tone, varied sentence structures, audience awareness, rhetorical devices
Total30-35

The format marks are essentially free — a proper greeting and “Thank you” at the end earn you 2-3 marks with almost no effort. Yet many students forget them.

Opening Techniques That Score High Marks

Step 1: The Greeting

Always start with a formal greeting that names specific people in order of seniority:

“A very good morning to our beloved principal, Puan Siti Aminah, respected teachers, and dear fellow students.”

Important details:

  • Name the most senior person first (principal, headmaster, or guest of honour)
  • Use respectful titles: “beloved”, “respected”, “dear”
  • If the question specifies who you are addressing (e.g., “students at a school assembly”), tailor the greeting accordingly
  • The greeting alone is worth format marks — never skip it

Step 2: The Hook

Immediately after the greeting, grab attention with one of these techniques:

Rhetorical question: “Have you ever stopped to think about how much water you waste every single day? What if I told you that the average Malaysian teenager wastes enough water each week to fill a bathtub — twice?”

Startling statistic: “Did you know that Malaysian teenagers spend an average of 7 hours a day staring at their phone screens? That is 2,555 hours a year — the equivalent of 106 full days.”

Brief anecdote: “Last week, I watched a classmate throw a plastic bottle into the drain behind our school canteen. As the bottle floated away, I realised something: if every student in this school throws away just one bottle a day, that is 1,500 bottles polluting our drains every single week.”

Provocative statement: “We are the laziest generation in Malaysian history. At least, that is what the newspapers say. But I am here to tell you that they are wrong — and I have proof.”

Direct address: “Look at the person sitting next to you. Now imagine that in five years, one of you will be earning RM5,000 a month, and the other will be earning RM2,000. The difference? It is not talent. It is English.”

Choose whichever technique suits the topic. Rhetorical questions are the safest and most versatile option.

Step 3: State Your Purpose

After the hook, clearly state who you are and why you are speaking:

“As the President of the English Language Society, I stand before you today to share three practical ways we can improve our English outside the classroom.”

Body Paragraphs: The RICE Technique

For each content point, use the RICE framework to ensure depth and audience engagement:

  • Reason: State your point clearly
  • Illustration: Give a specific example, statistic, or scenario
  • Connection: Relate it directly to your audience (“As students in this school, we…”)
  • Emotion: Appeal to feelings — pride, concern, hope, determination

Full RICE Example:

“Firstly, reading for just 15 minutes a day dramatically improves our vocabulary and grammar (Reason). Research shows that students who read English material regularly learn 1,000 new words per year — without even trying. When we read novels, news articles, or even English subtitles on Netflix, we naturally absorb sentence structures and expressions (Illustration). As SPM students who need to write two essays in Paper 1, this directly translates to a richer vocabulary that impresses examiners and earns us higher marks (Connection). Imagine walking into the exam hall in November knowing that you have the words to express any idea clearly and confidently. Imagine writing an essay that flows naturally because the phrases come to you without struggle — that confidence alone is worth the effort (Emotion).”

Notice how the paragraph moves from a factual statement to a personal, emotional appeal. This is what separates a B-grade speech from an A-grade speech.

Rhetorical Devices That Impress Examiners

Using rhetorical devices shows sophisticated language awareness. Here are the most effective ones for SPM speeches:

DeviceExampleEffect
Rhetorical question”Are we going to sit by and do nothing?”Engages audience, makes them think
Repetition (anaphora)“We must act now. We must act together. We must act with conviction.”Creates rhythm and emphasis
Rule of Three”Reading builds knowledge, sharpens thinking, and opens doors.”Creates memorable, balanced phrasing
Direct address”You — yes, you in the back row — this affects you too.”Makes speech feel personal
Contrast”We spend hours on TikTok but cannot spare 15 minutes for reading.”Highlights the point dramatically
Inclusive language”Together, we can transform our school into a model of environmental responsibility.”Creates unity and shared purpose
Hypophora”So what can we do about it? The answer is simpler than you think.”Guides audience through your argument

Aim to use at least 2-3 of these devices naturally throughout your speech. Do not force them — the examiner can tell when rhetorical devices are shoehorned in awkwardly.

Closing Strategies That Leave an Impact

Your closing is the last thing the examiner reads. Make it memorable.

Call to action: “So I urge each and every one of you — start with just 15 minutes of reading today. Download one English article on your phone tonight. Read it before you sleep. It is a small step, but it is the first step towards a future where English is your strength, not your weakness.”

Inspiring quote: “As Nelson Mandela once said, ‘Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.’ Let us wield that weapon wisely. Let us start today.”

Challenge: “The question is not whether we can make a difference — the question is whether we will. I challenge every single person in this hall to read one English article a day for the next 30 days. If you do, I guarantee you will see a change — not just in your English, but in your confidence.”

Circle back to the opening: If you opened with an anecdote or statistic, refer back to it: “Remember the plastic bottle I mentioned at the beginning? Imagine if, instead of throwing it into the drain, my classmate had walked ten steps to the recycling bin. One small action. Multiplied by 1,500 students. That is the power we hold.”

Always end with “Thank you” — this earns format marks and signals a clean ending.

Common Speech Topics in SPM English

Based on past SPM papers and trial exams, these topics appear frequently:

  1. The importance of reading (books, English material, digital reading)
  2. Environmental awareness (recycling, reducing plastic, saving water/energy)
  3. The impact of social media/technology on students
  4. Health and fitness among teenagers
  5. The importance of co-curricular activities
  6. Moral values (honesty, kindness, respect, responsibility)
  7. Study habits and exam preparation tips
  8. The dangers of bullying, vandalism, or unhealthy habits
  9. Unity and racial harmony in Malaysia
  10. Career preparation and the importance of English for future success

Practise writing speeches on at least five of these topics before SPM. The themes repeat with slight variations, so if you have practised a speech on “the importance of reading,” you can adapt it for “how to improve your English” or “healthy habits for the mind.”

Common Mistakes That Cost Marks

  1. Writing like an essay — speeches need a conversational, engaging tone with direct audience address. If you remove the greeting and it reads like an essay, you have written it wrong.
  2. No call to action — the audience needs to know what to do. A speech without a call to action feels incomplete.
  3. Exceeding the word limit — 250-300 words is the sweet spot for Directed Writing. Going over 350 wastes time and risks careless errors.
  4. Forgetting the greeting — this costs you easy format marks. There is no excuse for losing these marks.
  5. No audience engagement — use “we,” “us,” “you,” and rhetorical questions throughout. The examiner should feel like someone is actually speaking to them.
  6. Monotonous structure — do not start every paragraph with “Firstly… Secondly… Thirdly…” Use varied transitions: “More importantly…”, “What many people fail to realise is…”, “Consider this…”
  7. No emotional appeal — facts alone do not make a good speech. You need to make the audience feel something.

Practice Plan

Practise one speech per week for the six weeks before SPM using different topics from the list above. For each speech:

  1. Plan for 5 minutes (choose your hook, list your RICE points)
  2. Write for 25 minutes (aim for 250-300 words)
  3. Read it aloud — if it does not sound like something you would actually say, revise the tone
  4. Check: Does it have a greeting? A hook? RICE paragraphs? A strong closing? “Thank you”?

By the sixth week, you will be able to write a polished speech in under 30 minutes with confidence.


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